It seem that David wanted to spend time as his alter ego as Debbi, he enters certain parts of the woods, that is mysterious part of the forest that certain time of the season no one enter. Thou he didn't believe in the stories he enter the woods in his alter ego as the girl Debbi. And then things got stranger. It seem he misplace his backpack. And has go back as her. The strangest thing he feeling like a girl. Time she back to the house!
Sometimes life happens, but maybe you missed the 12 new ones mixed in with the re-posts. I was taught if I have nothing nice to say then say nothing. I believe sitting behind a keyboard the same should apply.
I like Debbi’s whole outfit, pity about her shoes being forgotten, I’m sure though the walk was lovely, being a nice day amongst nature with the interesting crunch of dry leaves under her feet. The fear of being caught is well expressed in the writing. The walk back is going to be tough, but when she gets there, maybe it won’t be as bad as she thought, fingers and toes crossed.
It seem that David wanted to spend time as his alter ego as Debbi, he enters certain parts of the woods, that is mysterious part of the forest that certain time of the season no one enter. Thou he didn't believe in the stories he enter the woods in his alter ego as the girl Debbi. And then things got stranger. It seem he misplace his backpack. And has go back as her. The strangest thing he feeling like a girl. Time she back to the house!
ReplyDeleteInstead of re-posting old stuff why don’t you be creative and actually make something new
ReplyDeleteSometimes life happens, but maybe you missed the 12 new ones mixed in with the re-posts. I was taught if I have nothing nice to say then say nothing. I believe sitting behind a keyboard the same should apply.
DeleteBut you don’t do new ones very often which is pretty sad
DeleteBecca is right please be nice.
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DeletePlease give us a link to your creations COL I am sure they must be magnificient.
DeleteI like Debbi’s whole outfit, pity about her shoes being forgotten, I’m sure though the walk was lovely, being a nice day amongst nature with the interesting crunch of dry leaves under her feet. The fear of being caught is well expressed in the writing. The walk back is going to be tough, but when she gets there, maybe it won’t be as bad as she thought, fingers and toes crossed.
ReplyDeleteHe would have had anyway one day to tell his parents so this could be the perfect time to present Debbi to his grandparents and parents..
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